Wednesday 22 September 2021

Minor Update to Chapter 15

Thank you to the anonymous Fanfiction.net poster who caught a couple of continuity problems:

During the scene in which Sese is listing the problems with the Council the name of the Chairman is wrong, it should be Fukuda Ikemoto. Takeda Ryobe is Number Three.

When Suzue and Keiko go from the airport to her house they take a bus but in chapter 12 they took a train. I suppose that it is possible that there could be more than one way to go from one place to another, the train service be stopped or inconvenient or in chapter 12 they weren't going to her house, but still it caught my attention.

Good catches, both.  I have posted a corrected chapter 15 today, both on my website and on Fanfiction.net.

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