Corrections already!

I've updated chapter 12 with three minor corrections. Two were spelling errors; the third was in the episode recap, where I referred to the ghost of Serenity giving a "henshin wand" to an unidentified girl. It was, of course, a brooch, not a henshin wand. Whoops! My thanks to Dallbun for pointing this out.

Will try to get the updated Who's Who appendix uploaded tonight.

Finally, to those who've already posted with their reactions…thanks.

Chapter 12 now posted

Done. It's posted, on the home page and to the FFML.

I still have grave doubts about some parts of it—particularly the ending—but I think at some point I just have to give in and say that it's as good as I'm going to get it any time soon. No doubt it'll go the way of earlier chapters: in a year or two I'll be able to see exactly what's wrong with it, and do something about it.

Sufficient unto the day is the evil thereof.

In the meantime, enjoy…and, of course, I'd be grateful for any commentary you may have to offer.

3 November

♫ Happy birthday to me … ♫

^_^