Minor update to Chapter 15
Hi there,
I've just posted a minor tweak to chapter 15. (Note, this update is only on my website; I haven't gotten around to putting it on FF.net). There's a scene in the chapter where Iku appears to be sharing a room with Dhiti—whereas other scenes, in both chapters 14 and 15, make it clear that Iku is staying in the guest room at Dhiti's house. So I've rewritten a couple of paragraphs to fix that.
As part of the update, both chapters 14 and 15 now have an entirely new look—they use a different stylesheet which I think is a lot more readable than the old one. (Chapter 14 doesn't show on the SM4200 page as an update, because there's no actual story changes—just style changes.)
Let me know what you think of the new look! If people are generally favourable, I'll update the earlier chapters as well.
Chapter 16 update: now at 9169 words.

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