Not so finished

Did I say the combat sequence was finished?

* hollow laugh *

When I looked at it again the next day I was amazed at how bad it was. Spent the last week or so wrestling with it, trying to solve the problems. It's better now, though still not perfect. In the meatime I'm pressing onward with the following scenes while I think it over some more.

31391 words now. I wrote a fair bit late last night and deleted it all today. Not even worth saving for the omake file.

Little by little, I progress...